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laurendo

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Post Wed Jul 04, 2012 11:53 am

Hi Everyone!

Hey y'all! I want to start drawing more regularly again, so... here I am! Figured would be good to get involved with a community, and I'd really like to get some feedback and critique.

Here is a recent(ish) colour pencil sketch of mine:

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Looking forward to getting to know everyone :D
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Phan-Tom

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Post Thu Jul 05, 2012 12:26 am

Re: Hi Everyone!

Did you have reference for this drawing?
Her chin looks a little short.
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Feeling sorry for those critics who talk nonsense in the hope of appearing well-informed.
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Xartist

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Post Thu Jul 05, 2012 4:20 am

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You did a good job on her lips and eyes, look quite realistic.
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laurendo

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Post Thu Jul 05, 2012 5:06 am

Re: Hi Everyone!

I did use a reference but I think you are right about the chin - also her nose is a little out of proportion. I think in my reference picture her chin was more hidden behind a raised shoulder, but here it just looks short!
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Aecstà

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Post Thu Jul 05, 2012 6:36 am

Re: Hi Everyone!

I really agree with Xartist, good work on her eyes, less good on her mouth. But i think with the time and the training, these small problems will be clear.
I waiting to see others pictures to you.
I am French so I don't speak English very well, be gentle please.
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Jonathan Ortiz

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Post Fri Jul 06, 2012 10:54 am

Re: Hi Everyone!

Nice eyes1 Congrats!
Keep working!
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laurendo

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Post Fri Jul 06, 2012 11:46 am

More Drawings

Here are couple of more recent ones. Interested in feedback, thank you everyone for the lovely/constructive comments so far :)

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