Newest Drawings

I am not completely happy with the drawing, but I think the emotion comes across clearly.

Any comments or critiques are welcome.

Looks pretty good but i think you tend to over-shade your drawings.

Thanks for the feedback, Russ.
I can certainly see where you say that, but in this picture I think it comes more from the quality of the picture.
It looks almost dirty?
Which could be because I set my pencil tin down on it and the tin had something on the back of it that got on the picture. >:(

Anyway, this is a better quality picture. It is still a WIP, but I like it thus far.

Yea,that one looks cleaner..you must protect your work from fingers and other objects
Should those chains have a tighter v on them?

I really need to get that stuff that you spray on finished drawings, but I never feel like their finished, so I never want to spray them...

I don't think I know what your talking about on the necklaces? The part where the pendant loops around the chain?

This is my newest drawing. It isn't finished, but nearly so.


Revised