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I think it's finished now?
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Post Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:13 pm

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Personally i believe that drawing needs more work. The hair needs to be refined more. Also, i never understand why when someone tells the artist that their drawing is not coming out like the picture they are drawing it off they respond that they are not looking for an exact copy. Then why use a picture? why not just draw a person out of your head? Just saying.... If i use a reference picture i try to get it 100% exactly down on my paper. But thats just me. Also that sharp line in the bottom of the chin stands out too much...
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Post Sat Mar 17, 2012 1:11 am

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Russ I told you to do something with the hair. Buying a ticket tomorrow...You wouldn't lie to me so here goes. You did an excellent job on the eyes. Some of it still looks like a line drawing. Fix the chin, Give her eyebrows some details. All the hair needs is some lines cut in more with the eraser and blended then darker lines added. 93fox is right about it not being finished.To us its not. We both know you can do more to it but if you like it then that's also fine with me. How many days do you have in this about a week...I am encouraging you to continue with it even if you sprayed it you can keep going. Give it one more week of work. You will be happy you did in the end. Next time use a bigger photo.
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Post Sat Mar 17, 2012 10:39 am

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Thanks for the feedback,no it's not sprayed yet because i was unsure myself,that's why i put a question mark above the last picture post.The ref i used is very hard to see so i couldn't draw it exactly as 93fox insists i should!
Will go and have a look at the chin area,I also left out the back shadows because i wanted a 'cleaner' drawing.
Phan-Tom,any chance of a gif for this,maybe it would help me and others,thanks.
I appreciate ANY feedback,thanks everyone for taking the time to post :D
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Post Sat Mar 17, 2012 12:43 pm

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Thank you Tom,that picture is a lot darker than the one i used and printed off,this might be another lesson for us all.Some draw from PCs and others,like me,print out a copy and draw from that.Problem being the quality of print out.The other thing worth mentioning is the 'untouched' quality of the camera picture,not always a true indication of the original,anyway,i think i will try and work more on DBR :D
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Post Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:27 pm

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Larger photos you cant draw it if you cant see it. 93fox doesn't insists it be 100 % of the photo He just wants you to finish it.

You can do it Russ! I want you to see you really can draw like the rest of us. You could all along. If you have want a break from it then take one it will still be there. But finish it!
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Post Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:56 pm

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Encouraging not criticizing. You don't have to push yourself. Just take your self out of the picture. Look at it like I drew it what does it need. You tell me here below. This is a good exercise If you can see it I can see it.
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Post Sat Mar 17, 2012 10:59 pm

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Debbie,I know you're encouraging me,sometimes things get lost in translation between England and AmeriCanada,we speak the same language differently :D
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Post Sun Mar 18, 2012 12:24 am

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Russ, personally, from all the advice that you give out here, i really expect more from you. Lets say i was to have done drawing and called it done, im sure there are many things you could of pointed out that needed more work. Do that to yourself! What would Russ change in Russ's drawings. Always keep that mentality and go a step forward to achieve the result YOU really want.
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