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Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:19 am
by titus09
Hello, thank you guys for all of your comments on the little boy the last time I was here. Now I'm back with more drawing and I hope I would get more comments than before. Thank you guys so much!!!

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Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 3:41 am
by booters
Very good!

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 8:07 am
by ajcurly
Very nice. What paper is this? Wondering if it's the paper...the scan or your technique giving this texture. :D

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:11 am
by titus09
I use bristol board and take pictures of the drawings since they wouldnt fit the scanning machine

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:41 am
by Jonathan Ortiz
Wao! Very good works. I liked them, specially the cat, I can't distinguish where the hair ends. Did you do it on purpose? Or it is because of the picture?

Congrats!

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:13 pm
by titus09
hey Jonathan, the cat in the picture reference looks like it's coming out of the dark so that's why you don't see where the hair ends. I'll try to find my reference. I just started doing these things so I tried to draw as close as possible.

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:08 pm
by Jonathan Ortiz

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 6:11 pm
by haffen
Very nice and realistic drawings.
I have only one suggestion, Shes hand is fat and deformed...

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:21 am
by titus09
Thanks haffen for your comments. Do you have any suggestion I should make to her hand?

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:40 pm
by jan
great renderings, with more contrast, specially darker darks, they would be even better

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

PostPosted: Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:23 pm
by ajcurly
I see what it is with the hand....the 1st finger needs to angle more towards the back of the hand....this makes it appear fat.