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titus09

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Post Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:19 am

Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

Hello, thank you guys for all of your comments on the little boy the last time I was here. Now I'm back with more drawing and I hope I would get more comments than before. Thank you guys so much!!!

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Post Wed Dec 21, 2011 3:41 am

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

Very good!
Feeling like a freak on a leash.
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Post Wed Dec 21, 2011 8:07 am

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Very nice. What paper is this? Wondering if it's the paper...the scan or your technique giving this texture. :D
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Post Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:11 am

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I use bristol board and take pictures of the drawings since they wouldnt fit the scanning machine
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Post Wed Dec 21, 2011 10:41 am

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Wao! Very good works. I liked them, specially the cat, I can't distinguish where the hair ends. Did you do it on purpose? Or it is because of the picture?

Congrats!
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Post Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:13 pm

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hey Jonathan, the cat in the picture reference looks like it's coming out of the dark so that's why you don't see where the hair ends. I'll try to find my reference. I just started doing these things so I tried to draw as close as possible.
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Post Fri Dec 23, 2011 6:11 pm

Re: Hello I'm back in need of more critique!!!

Very nice and realistic drawings.
I have only one suggestion, Shes hand is fat and deformed...
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Post Sat Dec 24, 2011 12:21 am

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Thanks haffen for your comments. Do you have any suggestion I should make to her hand?
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Post Wed Jan 04, 2012 7:40 pm

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great renderings, with more contrast, specially darker darks, they would be even better
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Post Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:23 pm

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I see what it is with the hand....the 1st finger needs to angle more towards the back of the hand....this makes it appear fat.

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