I need critique!!!

Hi, I'm new to this forum and I'm blown away by stuffs on here. I just finished this after 2 weeks. Please give me any advise you want!!! The more the better!!!!! Thank you much.

Proportions look good did you graph it? Do you have a reference picture? Either the paper is really rough or it looks really grainy because of the scan? Are you trying to do realism? The hair just looks rough and textured. The textures on the clothing however are very nice. Overall it's pretty good.

I'm sure you can give us a better picture.

Mmm... There's something about the eyes.

Congrats.

You're doing a fine job with this,take note of the points that have been raised and do some study of other Artists work.