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Post Sat Jun 11, 2011 7:04 am

Mila Kunis portrait Graphite WIP

Got a bit bored of Cheryl Cole, so I've started a new portrait to keep myself interested.

This is my WIP at moment.

Pic is off my phone, so sorry if quality is not great :)

Any critiques / comments appreciated :D



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Post Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:38 am

Re: Mila Kunis portrait Graphite WIP

...you gotta stop making your grid lines so hard; that goes for your numbering on your grid...no amount of erasing will get rid of the indentations and feint graphite left on the paper! Also, you should start advancing to making our features more detailed now - e.g. the eyes - make your lashes more refined, include features where the inner corner of the eye is, placement of the highlight in the eye should be in the same place for both eyes, and you should capture the subtle variations in pattern of the iris, add in subtle wrinkles around the eyes, make your shading to produce a watery look, even add the blood vessels!. Stuff like that. Other than that, looks well good...I like the hair! :mrgreen:

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Post Sat Jun 11, 2011 10:56 am

Re: Mila Kunis portrait Graphite WIP

[quote="nonstoptaxi"]...you gotta stop making your grid lines so hard; that goes for your numbering on your grid...no amount of erasing will get rid of the indentations and feint graphite left on the paper! Also, you should start advancing to making our features more detailed now - e.g. the eyes - make your lashes more refined, include features where the inner corner of the eye is, placement of the highlight in the eye should be in the same place for both eyes, and you should capture the subtle variations in pattern of the iris, add in subtle wrinkles around the eyes, make your shading to produce a watery look, even add the blood vessels!. Stuff like that. Other than that, looks well good...I like the hair! :mrgreen:

Good advice,but one step at a time..third portrait?
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Post Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:06 am

Re: Mila Kunis portrait Graphite WIP

Thanks for the advice nonstoptaxi! I'd never even thought about the highlights being in the same position on each eye, but it makes sense now! I'm not too bothered by the grids at the moment as I'm only practicing - I'm actually using a printed grid to save me time.

@Russ. Well, lets say 4th portrait, Cheryl was the 3rd - I will finish it soon!
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Post Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:32 am

Re: Mila Kunis portrait Graphite WIP

Good stuff for the small amount of experience you have. I agree about the grids, but if they ar eonly practice pieces I suppose it makes no difference. But you may find friends or contacts who wish to buy your work, and they won't with a grid running through it! :)
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Post Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:09 pm

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Post Sat Jun 18, 2011 8:18 am

Re: Mila Kunis portrait Graphite WIP

Nice drawing, great really, considering your experience.
Keep practicing, and try to develop somthing new with each piece, as mentioned above. :)



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