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Post Tue May 31, 2011 1:16 pm

Meshed rose (and background) - SKETCH

So, just a quicky i did today.
Nothing great, but i like the contrast. :)

Took me about 3 hours

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Post Tue May 31, 2011 10:27 pm

Re: Meshed rose (and background) - SKETCH

hmm....
Feeling like a freak on a leash.
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Re: Meshed rose (and background) - SKETCH

The petals need more definition to them so they "pop" out of the page. If you went a bit darker on the shadows it would really help. Right now the contrast between the really dark background and the really white flower is too great. Get some of the dark tones into the shadows on the flower and it would improve it greatly.
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Feeling like a freak on a leash.
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Post Thu Jun 02, 2011 5:18 am

Re: Meshed rose (and background) - SKETCH

canadianmaple09 @
Thanks for your detailed critic.
I will improve it a little and play around with contrasts. Maybe the exercise will help me with my next drawing.


booters@
Your critic is abolutly right.
But it is only a sketch or a scribble. For me a scribble and a detailed drawing are two different pair of shoes.
That is why i mark my sketches as sketches.

I don't post most of my sketches, but sometimes i do.
Probably because one of my upcoming project has to do with roses.

Probably i will improve some parts and then toss it into my scribble folder. :wink:

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