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i dont know if its the scanner or the paper but the chin looks as if it can be blended :?
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Jonathan,you have done a lovely portrait,my only advice would be to tone down or make slightly smaller the highlights in the eyes.In my opinion they look out of place (i know they are in the reference pic) Does anyone else have an opinion about this???
With the silhouette style they tend to glare,not so noticeable in colour.
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Common problem with me also,I always print off pictures i want to draw,you lose loads of the quality,others tend to work direct with their PC so you have a near perfect reference.
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Your doing a fantastic job! :) Keep it up.
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Post Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:28 am

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The portrait has turned out quite distinctive...a certain style to it! I would say 'commercially viable' even :mrgreen:
As for improvement areas, I would say the eyes could do some work...currently the pupil blurs into the iris; if you lighten the iris, will make the eyes less like two dark circles. I read somewhere that you should only ever have 1 highlight in the eye. I don't necessarily agree with this now, but I think 3 highlights in each eye makes it too 'busy'. Finally, I think your blending has given it that 'distinctive' style I mentioned...so nothing wrong with it, but if you wanted to render something that is more photo-realistic I would try blending your shading more to make it smoother, building up layers of graphite. But don't do that on the hair, or canadian maple will tell u off (as he did me!) :mrgreen:
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Hello, Mr. Ortiz. Your portrait of your daughter is so so adorable! I don't see any flaws on it. It's pretty darn nice-sweet work! By the way, you have a lovable daughter!
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