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Post Wed May 04, 2011 3:39 pm

Family portrait WIP

Well since I didn't do too bad with my first portrait, I decided to try drawing my wife and daughter ( I definitely need to be flattering with this one!!!).

I've only just started it and obviously have a long way to go, but have put some initial rough shading down and finished the outline

What do you guys think, am I on the right track, does everything look in proportion, or is there any major obstacles that you can see up ahead?

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P.S. sorry for the quality of the images I don't have a scanner and have been using my camera, there is a slight blur off hand movement it does look clearer than in the image.
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Post Wed May 04, 2011 5:21 pm

Re: Family portrait WIP

I think everything at the moment looks really good,your downfall is the grid lines, far to dark and will need erasing,try and do some blending with a stump or cotton face wipes,you will be very surprised with the outcome :D
Also don't forget to put a cover over anything you are leaning on.
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Post Wed May 04, 2011 6:50 pm

Re: Family portrait WIP

It looks good, but I'm a little concerned about the shadow under the girl's chin. You've drawn it really dark and without any of the detail of her neck showing, as you can see in the picture.
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Post Wed May 04, 2011 10:15 pm

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her eyes are spot on. look forward to seeing the updates.
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Post Thu May 05, 2011 2:53 am

Re: Family portrait WIP

Thanks for the comments guys, the printout of the image I worked off is much darker than it looks on the screen, hence the dark beard on her chin! I have tried to lighten it a bit and show some neck as suggested here.
You're right about the grid lines too I'm struggling to erase them cleanly, I wouldn't mind but I drew them lightly with a 4H pencil, I must just be heavy handed.

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Post Thu May 05, 2011 7:04 am

Re: Family portrait WIP

Great start. The 4h pencil may have made a groove in the tooth of the paper.....thats why it's hard to erase. I use hb and drag the pencil over the paper and yet sometime I have the same problem as you. The proportions look very good and I can't wait to see this finished.
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Post Sat May 07, 2011 4:12 am

Re: Family portrait WIP

Just posting an update.
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It still needs tidying, background darkening etc.
I'm not happy with the hair or the girl on the right's mouth, she looks like she's chewing a gobstopper and I can't work out what's wrong.
Any tips for drawing natural hair?

Also do you think it's too one dimensional - not enough contrast? If so how would I rectify that.

One last thing, do you think that the paper makes a difference, as I have just ordered some bristol board but this is drawn on a cheap sketch pad.
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Post Sat May 07, 2011 11:21 am

Re: Family portrait WIP

Thank you so much, that is absolutely fantastic advice and it's a huge help.
I'll try to salvage the hair now!!

Do you not recommend blending in the hair when drawing?
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Re: Family portrait WIP

I guess that depends on what you mean by "blending". When I use the word "blending" I mean using continuous pencil strokes (not lifting the pencil) to go gradually from dark to light (moving the pencil rapidly back and forth while you gently and slowly lessen the pressure) to create a gradient. I have a feeling you might be talking about "smudging", where you lay down pencil tones and then smudge with your finger or a Q-tip or a tortillon or some other device. If you're talking about smudging, then no, I don't use smudging when I draw hair. But some people do. You just kind of have to experiment and find out what method works best for you.
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Post Sun May 08, 2011 8:57 am

Re: Family portrait WIP

you were right about upping the contrast. especially the background, where you should probably start out with a single shade. that area under the girl on viewer's right's chin is sort of looking like cellophane is wrapped around her chin. if you keep the background all evenly dark, i think the rest of the picture will really *pop*. otherwise, it really is a great drawing! nice job.
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Post Mon May 09, 2011 11:11 am

Re: Family portrait WIP

Thanks for the comments guys, I'm going to try and practice drawing the hair by following this tutorial , it sounds like a similar technique to what you described.
I'll also try and make it pop with some darker backgrounds

I have to say this forum is really friendly and helpful thanks for making me feel so welcome.

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