My design of a luxury coupe

hello once again for my 2nd edition in my Bouclier car series designed by me, inspired by my family name "Bouclier" which means sheild in French(I am French in case you didn't know).



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lol I'm a huge car guy, so whenever I see car pix I gotta look.

I find the front a little "flat" and confusing... and the way the lines flow over the front wheel make the Quaterpanel look like its made from Tissue paper and its hanging over the wheel like a drape.

I like the greenhouse though, flows nicely

yes thanks for your observations, next time try to at least say one thing nice please but anyways what greenhouse?

you guys are just ridiculous. get the hell away from my topic if it's just to seem like proffesionals because Im young and new here by showiing off your lifeless amout of posts and using elevated vobulary about whatever the hell you guys are even talking about

qwerty you need to mellow out im 15 and they dont act ignorant to me and act like their egos are so big.maybe its just you that is wrong. youre naive behavior has been clearly seen these guys are just here to help and critique and you are completely oblivious to any form of help assistance. the only way to get better at drawing is to draw get advice and learn from the advice. i have an idea for you, why dont you go out find a veteran and talk to him about something because with age comes wisdom and i learned that at an early age. ust take a chill pill and your life will be easier. MANNERS also help

I'm not sure what's going on above the front grille on the car, but this is what it looks like to me:


As for the drawing itself, you need to go darker with your darks and don't be afraid of contrast. It's all a little too monotone right now. You can achieve a lot more depth by really pushing your darks.

@Larc-Romeo, zach97, Russ

Haha! Young grasshopper has lots to learn.

if you really dont want to argue put your petty comments to the side. on the other hand werent you the one who wanted relevant comment to the thread