We cannot stress enough the importance of gridding,the hairline is wrong in two places,and the chin is out,please try and grid,for my sake and yours
If this comes across as being a bit harsh, then good,it's like being on a roundabout on here sometimes,please do some homework!!!
This is aimed not just at you,but all that can be bothered to read

High Elbows,Please don't take all this personally