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Post Tue Dec 25, 2012 7:34 pm

Children commission

another commission for my friend,, his three beautifull children,,its on A3 so i couldnt scan it,,had to take a photo of it and retush a bit in photoshop

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Post Tue Dec 25, 2012 7:35 pm

Re: Children commission

and with ref pic:

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Post Wed Dec 26, 2012 2:08 am

Re: Children commission

That is an awesome portrait, I struggle with hair, what pencil did you use on the hair, do you blend with a stump or tissue.
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Post Wed Dec 26, 2012 4:57 am

Re: Children commission

First of all, it looks awesome.
The only thing I can really see is something is off with the girl. I think it may be her eyebrow level. It is something small and I could be overly critical.
The boy on my right, it looks like HIS left ear may be a little too dark and HIS left hair line may need some tweaking. I'm sure drawing fine blonde hair like that isn't easy.

Anyway, I hope that doesn't sound overly picky, because it is a great piece.
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Post Wed Dec 26, 2012 2:01 pm

Re: Children commission

tnx for comments...aussie for hair i have used hb and 2b mechanical pentel pencils and 8b graphite stick

tanner,,i c the points u have picked up cant really do nothin about the things coz the drawing is already gone, i guess just have to be a bit more carefull or review it more times,,thing is that i was quite under presure with the deadline,,had to be by today morning as it was xmass present. the original loox better as i was struggling with scanin coz of the size so i had to work on it and lost some of the midtones
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Post Wed Dec 26, 2012 10:37 pm

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Ah now I feel bad for saying anything. I'm sure they were happy with it. ;)
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Post Fri Dec 28, 2012 9:26 pm

Re: Children commission

Dont feel bad about it,,they were more than happy with the result,,in fact the family has got 6 members all together,,so soon the gather pictures from all of them and save some money the will get back to me to make the whole family drawing.
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