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Post Fri Dec 07, 2012 11:38 pm

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I think I'm finally starting to get the proportions down after taking a break from drawing for a few months. :)

Let me know what you think, positive or negative.
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Post Sat Dec 08, 2012 4:23 pm

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I think you're right Tanner.
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Post Sat Dec 08, 2012 8:15 pm

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looks pretty good
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Post Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:43 pm

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Thanks, guys.

This is the newest one. I don't think its finished yet.... I'm not happy with his face quite yet.
Maybe its his far eye? I don't really know.

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Post Tue Dec 11, 2012 5:59 pm

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I would say that the far eye is not that much in angle as it should be within the symetry of the head,,also the far nose hole is quite large and there is no surrounding,,the closer on is too small,,and the ear is more flat than being in angle,,other than these small proprtion off's its a nice piece
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Post Tue Dec 11, 2012 6:36 pm

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I envy your gracefully smooth shading.
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Post Tue Dec 11, 2012 8:23 pm

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Under HIS Left eye the cheek looks like it's swollen,needs the line pulling away from the nose.
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Post Wed Dec 12, 2012 5:05 pm

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Congratulations, I see improvement in your drawings, compared to the old ones :)
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Post Thu Dec 13, 2012 8:56 pm

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Stanya, I think you're right on with your critiques. I'll try to fix it.
Russ, It's supposed to look like he's smiling, so I'll tweak it.

Tommy and Brandon, thank you. :)

This is another one (I go on binges, drawing a lot then not drawing for a few weeks or months.) As I've said before I illustrate my writings, so this is another character. Btw, all three men are supposed to look similar in this thread. They are family. This one has heavy Christian Bale influence. I think the top of his head may be a little short and his far eye may be a little too small. I have an issue drawing the furthest eyes. :/ His lips need some help too.

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Post Thu Dec 13, 2012 9:39 pm

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Tanner,If he's supposed to be smiling then he's seriously full of 'botox',please look in a mirror and see facial expressions including crows feet etc :shock:
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Post Sat Dec 15, 2012 6:26 pm

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Post Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:09 pm

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Thank you, Ramtin.
Russ, I agree he needs some more facial expressions. However, it isn't supposed to be a full on smile either.

This is a new WIP. This is my first time drawing a child, so it was quite a challenge... I'm not happy with the boy's hand or the man's eye.
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Post Tue Dec 18, 2012 2:39 pm

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Looks brilliant! Man..I can only dream of being as good as the people on this forum..lol!
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Post Tue Dec 18, 2012 7:13 pm

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I wouldnt worry much about the boys hand,,more about the man' s one,,i think that the palm is too small compare to the lenght of the fingers,,and yes the eye need some work too..other than that its another great work
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Post Sat Dec 22, 2012 5:26 pm

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Thank you. :)

Stanya, great eye, I didn't even notice the man's hand being messed up.

Newest. I need to finish his ear, but I'm not sure if I will. If it isn't terribly obvious by this thread, I am terrible at drawing ears. Lol
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