Dog - commission

I got one commission drawing,its a dog,,now im not really into drawing animals but money is money i took it,,so plz easy with critics its only my second dog portrait

and here it is with the ref photo

For me it looks good, you catched his likeness!
But you could darken the lower part of his muzzle a bit and also his nose.

I agree with Xartists comment, well done, nice to have a bit of extra cash before Xmas.

thank you for comments,,i can see exactly what part u talkin about,,will have to make it a bit darker b4 i give it away.

Agree with the others stanya,all said and done it's a wonderful piece.Also i would check out Larcs thread with his dog portrait and the use of an indenting tool for the nose.

If it's any help, it's here: http://dueysdrawings.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=5983&p=55463&hilit=+dog#p55463
The indenting tool was for the hair/fur, and I used circulism & blu-tac for the nose.

I think a better example for using an indenting stylus can be found on my Chinese Panther drawing here: http://dueysdrawings.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=6931&p=63737&hilit=+panther#p63737

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thank you for links,,i did checked them,,i got two possibly 3 more dogs for commission so ill be practising and try use all the new info to get even more results.

lisa please dont post scams what is not art or the topic related,,go and post ur rubbish somewhere else