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xgorian

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Post Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:49 am

The "Overly attached girlfriend"

Hello again, I'm back with more!
My last portrait was a little bit in the same value all over, so for this one i tried to bring in some darkness.
I would appreciate some criticism, so i can develop my drawings!
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Reference: http://i47.tinypic.com/zu4jmt.jpg
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Post Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:59 am

Re: The "Overly attached girlfriend"

:shock:
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Raks

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Post Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:47 pm

Re: The "Overly attached girlfriend"

Nicely done. But as we look the ref picture there is kind of a cast shadow on the left side, like hair drops that shadow there. It would really help to pop it out. But it has that right expression, so i would say almost perfect. And try to add middle tone between some of the shadows.

Don't take my advise as 100% true, cause i have done only 3 portraits so far.
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Post Sat Nov 17, 2012 5:54 pm

Re: The "Overly attached girlfriend"

:lol: Just saw this on facebook, definitely captured the likeness and expression.
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Post Sat Nov 17, 2012 7:25 pm

Re: The "Overly attached girlfriend"

:shock: lol well done
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Post Sat Nov 17, 2012 9:20 pm

Re: The "Overly attached girlfriend"

very nicely done,,love the expression,,only need a bit work on smoothness on the skin tones
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Post Sun Nov 18, 2012 11:11 am

Re: The "Overly attached girlfriend"

Thank you guys! And thanks for the tips, I appreciate it :)

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