Sat Nov 03, 2012 6:07 pm by Plissken
There is a spot on her nose, which bothers the eye,
above her right nostril (or is that just a mole). And the shadow is also too hard, too dark on the side of the nose, right side .
Look at her neck shadow, it's too dark too unnatural, doesn't really follow her neck curvature. Good work overall, but some contrast
and value studies could help you in your further work. Mostly the problem here with a realistic pencil copy renderers,
is that they want to draw "exactly" what they see, without knowing the basics of values,
contrast, perspective, proportion and so on. This is same as knitting. You are trying to perform a planned
in forth act on your own way. But it's impossible to do it on your own way cause it's already planned,
and it's already made. Your pencil renders are great don't get me wrong, but you will still have to
go back to the basics and to learn some basics. No matter how stupid that sounds, but it's like that.
Just trying to help in your improvements. Be good and take care.
See my drawings and digital paintings now!!!
Or else, drunk Mel Gibson will come to your house and beat you up!