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Post Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:09 pm

Second attempt draw a portrait for me - Rita Hayworth WIP

This is my second attemp ever in drawing a portrait. It's still WIP but I think gives the idea. I hope you guys can help me improve with a couple of suggestions! :D

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I think the right eye is a bit off,,and inside of the mouth should be more dark,, in overal it can be a niece piece of art once is finished
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Thanks for the tips! I think the right eye is a little off too, it's just in the original pic she looks slightly squint, maybe I've exagerated it too much. This is the ref photo btw:

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as i have seen the ref foto,,just wanna also confirm the mouth,,need to be more dark inside of the mouth
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Shaping up nicely Tarma,try and invest in some mechanical pencils (I use a 0.2 hb and a 0.5 hb/4b).They tend to go deeper into the papers 'tooth' (structure),can you see all the very small dots of missing graphite?
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